I like the book as a whole, but I'm dubious about the x creatures by x turn thing.
If a aggressive opponent sees what you are doing, they will change plans and go for you. Sure you will have defensive creatures out by turn 3 (earliest engagement rounds for most aggro books), but those can be worked around.
Having 6 blasts and 4 minor heals and heals also seems excessive. If you plan to hardcast for a minimum of 6-7 rounds, you're basically saying almost everyone of your quick actions after that will be a blast or heal, leaving you little room for much else.
You have me a bit confused here. In the angels of Harlem thread, you said 2-3 angels would just get mauled by Grizzles with unavoidable. Why wouldn't essentially the same thing happen here? Sure, you have more creatures, but all of them have 10-12 life with 1-3 armor with 8 have defenses. So if I take what you said in the other thread, that means thay more creatures wouldn't really matter, no? Maybe I'm reading it wrong, but some clarification would be appreciated.
Final thought, I'm still not sold on not using a temple. Typically it will take more actions/mans/sbp for your opponent to destroy than you invested (especially if you don't even open with temple).
Overall an interesting book that leaves me with a lot of questions.