The lack of mobility concerns me. No Tanglevine or Force Hold to pin your opponent, no "get out of Tanglevine free" card (aka Teleport), no way to limit your own movement (e.g. Eagleclaw Boots or Tanglevine) and few ways to control movement (e.g. 1x Force Push) makes me a little queezy. Similarly, in my uber-aggro "rush" books, I often try to squeeze in a Cheetah Speed and/or Enfeeble and/or Mongoose Agility to ensure I can keep up with my opponent. Other than that, I like the level of aggression that this book suggests. It certainly won't be a long match...
(unless you get walled in or otherwise pinned down somehow, or your opponent is able to outrun you by ensaring you in Vines while being fast, etc).