I'm not trying to distract from the points made, but I'm honestly curious. What is wrong with the forcemaster's art?
You got me bang to rights there! As I've written almost every time I've posted about the Forcemaster...
Let's face it, she looks far cooler than the other mages (although Jokhtari may beg to differ).
Yes, she is an awesome-looking
clothed female Jedi/Sith Lord, proof that you don't need to keep them in bikinis.
However, would it be unfair to say that this isn't always the case?
I don't have the cards but is Samandriel (most powerful female creature) in a bikini like Jokhtari and Priestess?
This is so dangerous posting at work without the cards but I'm sure I'd subconsciously spotted a subtext here.
Women in Etheria prefer to sunbathe, not shop (oh dear, I'm gonna get clobbered by the PC brigade for that).
As Kich said elsewhere about a male and female of a new race: "he's dressed for the streets. she's dressed for the sheets".
Hey, this isn't my battle, it's Kich's: I just understand both views (you know what sitting on the fence gives you).
I'm personally fine with the art but the marketer in me thinks you should tone it down - or better still subvert it.
Imagine a female posing like in Michaelangelo's Thinker?
Or a male emerging from a shell like in Botticelli's Venus?
Ok, both too cultural as in-jokes but I'm sure there are US archetypes you can subvert.
It would just help to knowingly poke fun at fantasy tropes.
A bearded Dwarf Dowager berserker, with female breastplate, would solve that age old mystery...
It's really difficult because if you take a risk (like the Necromancer book which I love), you'll offend some people.
But if you don't take risks, you become stale and cliche to your "seen it all before" jaded market.
All I am proposing is a bit more humour, subverting what we fantasy fans expect - but in a way that doesn't jar.
Hey, I'm personally fine with your art (Nightshade Lotus is an incredibly beautiful masterpiece).
I just think you could alienate unexplored markets so should make Etheria feel less old-fashion.
So far the only non-white face is a savage barbarian shaman (female so scantily clad) who resists the colonising crusaders.
I'm not offended by it at all (in fact, I've said Kumanjaro is seeped in thematic strength).
But you can see how that sole depiction could be viewed, a very white colonial mindset.
All we're missing is a mincing elf bard and his spikey-haired warrior-maiden bodyguard and we'll have a full set!
Yes, the Forcemaster art is excellent and, with her brooding cowl, the best depiction of a mage of either gender.